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She’s a walking contradiction
Combat boots, tube tops, tight skirts
Humming Mozart
And toting around a violin case
Like it’s the most normal thing in the world
Coincidentally the friend of
Mr. Hyperbole
The quiet boy who makes spilled milk
Look like the end of the world
Just your regular odd pair
Strolling about in such a…

Stereotypical world
:iconvenusprincess:

Author's Comments

i like the term "walking contradiction"

note: hyperbole=exaggeration(just in case you didn't know)

^-^

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:iconashiato:
It has a wonderful flow!

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"Self-consciousness destroys art." --Matt Alt
:iconxshadowxbeingx:
you've been on a roll lately!! all your poems have been amazing!
i wish i was friends with Mr.Hyperbole ;__;

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92% of teens moved on to rap music.
If you're part of the 8% that rock out everyday, put this in your signature

I'm not paranoid! Which of my enemies told you this!?

TO WRITE LOVE ON HER ARMS [link]
:iconvenusprincess:
thank you, being on a roll is funxD

i've been writing poems for like 4 yr.s now, so i should hope my poems have been getting better, lol.

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"Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense."- Buddha
:iconkangar0-o:
I can't really think of any critique at the moment (sorry!), but! I do really love the line "humming Mozart." It's simple, but somehow eloquent.

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"Silly kid, Trix are for rabbits!"
:iconxshadowxbeingx:
lol oh, they're fantastic! :)

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92% of teens moved on to rap music.
If you're part of the 8% that rock out everyday, put this in your signature

I'm not paranoid! Which of my enemies told you this!?

TO WRITE LOVE ON HER ARMS [link]
:iconshore-rose:
This is a great little bundle of words. I also really liked "walking contradiction". I think that most of the world is a "walking contradiction".

--Shore

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In this economy, I am currently worth Two cents and One Peso.
:iconwarpmaster:
Really nice ending! I love reading your poems becasue they are all so different and with really creative ideas. I like how you start out discribing the girl. That is my favorite part.

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But those who wait for the Lord shall renew their strength, they shall mount up with wings like eagles, they shall run and not be weary, they shall walk and not faint.

-Isiah 40: 31
:iconvenusprincess:
thanksxD

i like ur comments---they're more informative than "good job!"(altho i like those kinds of comments too,lol)

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"Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense."- Buddha
:iconvenusprincess:
thanks xD (flow's always good) :nod:

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"Believe nothing, no matter where you read it or who has said it, not even if I have said it, unless it agrees with your own reason and your own common sense."- Buddha

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